under the influence of the word....."GOD!"
i've committed my life to certain thoughts.....
der's one thing...i ve been waiting to be...
human at ma core...n to be called..."me"
i had a little "stupid" dream...
some desires my very "own"....
now dat im capable dey seem....
so "distant" n "unknown"....
in a thought unknown...
i wanted self jst be dead
irrelevent existence foregone....
alow some else halp n be "made"
feeling "unsunk" N unable to swim.....though......
......i pray.............
under the influence of the word....."GOD!"
under the influence of the word....."GOD!"
now tats wat i called Awesome...
ReplyDeletem sure dis is some rave side of urs...venerable...oh most...!or is it wat i wd call "under the 'INFLUENCE OF GOD'"...
al d bst...dear...
very nice..........
ReplyDeletemujhe toh pata hi nahi tha ki tum poet bhi ho..........
keep it up........
hey that's pretty good ! i didn't know you could write poetry. quite some talent. keep it up!
ReplyDeletejust one request. could you not use slangs in your poems? sort of spoils the effect that you are trying to create.it is not gangsta rap, let's keep it that way. i hope you don't think i am criticizing or anything because i really did love your poetry. hence the suggestion. i mean well.
all the best!
i know that a great man said....
ReplyDeletethat if you believe that there is no god then every thing you do is justified......
oh... God help me in what i do..
ReplyDeletei know what i need can only be given by you..
i wonder why do you make me so tired..
but when i turn back my pages i see my life nicely wired...
then i understand where are these thorns coming from...
as it is to rectify every thing since we were born..