i quit...
i quit all i called life...
i quit my being alive...
today i cease to exist...
i "accept" n i ..."forfiet"!!
i wished to kill maself,
but i nvr wished i'd die!!!!
bt today i leave all ma hope,
dont even wish to try!!!!
dere was love dere was war...
i had some some reason to cry!!!
and today it ends so abrupt...
leaves behind my eyes so dry!!!
i live...
i live all i called life!!!
i livwe my being alive.....
today i live jst to exist....
i "accept" n "i"........
i wish u add the last line please do so and feed back
lokesh dwivedi
good one man its true here as well............
ReplyDeletegr8 work...i hope its original..!!
ReplyDeletefantastic fabulous fantabulous.. marr hi daloge..
ReplyDeleteu rock bro..keep up the gud work..
"Real tears r nt tat fall frm eyes nd cover d face bt.. those tat flow frm heart nd cover d soul"
Gr8 work...yt again...!
ReplyDeletethey say evry poet is re-christened in hs works...
nd sure u r 'D DUKE'...
lookin 4wd 4 ur nxt master-piece...
till then i ll hv 2 work real hard 2 'apprise' maslf vid words(2 comment) tat make em known...
al d bst...
thanks for all the comments i m posting another very soon...hope u ll like it too...n for informations sake i ve not copied...
ReplyDeleteits a gud alternative carrier option
ReplyDeletehmmmmm... gud man
ReplyDeletebut still not gud enough to get critics COMMENT...
badi dukh bhari aur deep poetry likhte ho
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