...wen u read this ...just visualize...visualize dat u r in the midst of a chaotic place, u can see the faces but u cannot hear the voices, its all silent...and then there's a cry...
at this very point this emerges in "your" heart...
I wish...i was not awake!!
or, else it was all fake...
only if i cud hide...
hold the whole of this inside!!!
n dere were no humans termed dead...
before they aged to their death bed...
indeed it hurts...indeed i cry...
wenevr i hear a premature die!!
politics, religion...bounderies...
i wish there were mome of these...
question i ask myself....
why am i of no help...??
what do i make so much fuss about...
when i do nothing to sort it out...
N why i wish it was all fake...??
when i am not awake...!!!
nice really touching................
ReplyDeletereally touching................
ReplyDeletekeep it up............
not bad man!
ReplyDeletebaadi tareefe ki hai logo ne.. mujhe to samhaj hi nhi aayi..u r luking vry confused yaar! this is not ur real inside!!
ReplyDeletehey ur thoughts r really beautiful dear ......how manage to write such lines????.....good very good
ReplyDeletegud yaar...
ReplyDeletei missed ur lines before..
nice really touching..
you are writter so why west your
ReplyDeletetime into C.A joining your bigness and writing continue today i will talk to uncle you are writter not C.A brother ok wakup sid.............
...gives a strange sense of mobbed-solitude...
ReplyDeletemay be a revisit wud do d trick...
ALL DA BST...!!!
Keep Writing.....
Sometimes...
ReplyDeleteI can not hide my feelings Inside...
Its true it was'nt that touching...
to make me cry...
yeah...
the misery u expressed in words...
Is quite commendable...
yeah...
I wont say u are the best...
Not cause u wrote bad...
Its cause I guess I am none able to...
Yeah...
Gr8 one bro...